I am very pleased to have my poem, “Walking with My Mother,” published in the April 3, 2018 edition of One Sentence Poems.
This poem did not start out as a one-sentence poem. Come to think of it, I’ve never set out to write a one-sentence poem. I just wanted to capture the feeling of a particular experience on a particular day.
I wrote what I thought was the beginning of the poem. The first stanza came to me fully formed. But after that first stanza, no additional lines were forthcoming. Every time I went to work on the poem, nothing.
After countless rereadings, the light finally dawned. No other lines were forthcoming because four lines were enough to capture that experience of walking with my mother. I’m gratified that One Sentence Poems thought so, too.
Thank you for teaching us about one sentence poems. As her pen strokes the paper, Elizabeth beckons us to join her and her mother along the path of family.
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Thank you so much for your comment, MaryAnne!
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Well done! 🙂
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Thanks, Brett!
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Absoluely lovely. And thank you for giving me another form of poetry to contemplate.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! When it comes to poetry, I definitely write by the seat of my pants.
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Teehee. It seems a fairly strong seat, though.
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I am so glad that I found your “Walking with My Mother”. It gave me the inspiration to write something about my mother and me.
Thank you!!
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I’m glad to hear it! I’d love to read your piece when it’s ready.
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My sincerest congratulations, Liz! Super!!
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Thanks, Lance! It’s been fun trying my hand at some different forms of writing.
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My pleasure, Liz. And you do it exceedingly well!
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