I’m delighted to share that my poem, “At Summer’s End,” has been published in the June 2020 edition of North of Oxford:“At Summer’s End.”
The poem was inspired by a late summer day at Fort Foster on the coast of Kittery, Maine. My eye was caught by a bank of beach roses that didn’t look right to me. They were the wrong shape, the wrong size, and the wrong color. The following images represent how the poem unfolded.
Fort Foster, 2017Hannaford Cove Road, c. 1960sGreat-Great Aunt Etta & Liz, August 1957Etta Reading to Nephew Fred & Niece Velma, c. 1905Hannaford Cove Road Cottage, c. 1970sKay at the Cottage, Summer 1957Etta, c. 1950Lunch at the Economy Point Homestead, c. 1918Etta on the Right with Her Sisters Elizabeth, Jane & Annie, c. 1900Economy Point, 2017Winter in Economy, Nova Scotia, 1930sWater off Economy Point
Congratulations Liz on this poem’s publication. I appreciate reading about summer’s end with the inevitable making of rose hip jelly. This poem encouraged me to read further about this delicacy. I see you live in Vermont, and my wife and I may plan a trip over this way when traveling is more favorable and safe. I think I still have an older cousin living in Vermont.
Thank you! I bought some rose hip jelly at the store a few years ago, but it was quite insipid compared to the homemade version. I’m working in Vermont (via the Internet), and I graduated from high school there, but I’m living in New Hampshire. I have a younger cousin living in Vermont.
Thank you, Robbie. I know how fortunate I am to be the Keeper of the Family Archives. This treasure trove of photos has inspired countless stories and poems–and I finished a new tanka just last night!
What a beautiful trip (in words and pictures) down memory lane. And for me, personal memories also—my mother used to love collecting rose hips at the end of August, to make rose hip jelly. Congratulations and thank you, Liz!
Thank you Liz, for sharing Etta with me. As I looked at the “long-ago” photos and read your word, she came alive to me. I was there with her harvesting the rose hips. You reminded me of the times my father and I would go blueberry picking in Northern Manitoba surrounded by black flies. I thought of how Etta worked over a hot stove to bring forth the precious jelly and thought of my grandmother canning fruit, with the steam filling the kitchen. I love the last days of summer, the time of harvest, the preparation for the long winter days of rest. A beautiful poem, Liz – thank you.
Congratulations, Liz. Your poem was full of delicious memories and delicious rosehips. I really loved it. You bear a strong familial resemblance to Etta. I’m sure that has been said before. 🙂
Thank you, Tracy. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. When I was putting the post together, I was very surprised to see how much I resemble Etta now. No one in the family had remarked on it before.
Thank you, Jennie! I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem and the photos. I’m going to have to do a little digging into Etta’s life. (I’d started a few years ago and then set it aside.) She emigrated to the US probably in the early 1920s. She ended up running a home for “wayward girls” in Newton, Massachusetts until she retired.
That should be a great research to do. I was struck by the photo of her with her sisters, thinking that was roughly the same age as my grandmother, too. So, how can I be here in this day and age, yet have a grandmother who lived so very long ago? She was a big part of my life. It is mind boggling.
This is a beautiful poem filled with evocative imagery and rich symbolism! I was especially taken with your intentional, repeated use of “memory,” especially of “memory at cliff’s edge,” and “Unexpectedly signaling the end.” Your great, low sprawls of dusty bushes juxtaposed with the brilliant crimson rose hips is wonderful. I can see it. I also love how you blended your memories with your mother’s, and the image of your mother looking down from the dormer at Aunt Etta from the beginning of the preserving work is precious. Your poem is a family legacy in itself, even without all the wonderful photos you’ve included! Thank you for making it available to us. With each reading I see something more…
Oh, my goodness, Mary Jo, thank you so much for your kind words! They mean a lot. Part of what is so important about writing poems like this one is to preserve those places and people as they were. I need to do it for myself, but you’re right, they can be passed down as a family legacy.
I reflected back in (Summers End) to Mary Agnes and I walking the ridge above Penobscot Bay, Northport, ME, many years ago on family vacations. Grandson David graduated from Champlain in May of 2017. He has been with Viacom in NYC and doing quite well with his Champlain education in the Audio – Video field. You help to continue my education Lis. You forever make me look up word meanings, ellipsis sent me there this trip. You a Navy wife, Mary Agnes a Marine Corps wife.
Liz, congratulations! A wonderful poem and I switched back and forth with your photographs here – an ideal accompaniment to your words! Precious memories beautifully recalled – well done!
Congratulations!, (though I’m excruciatingly late). Summer just snapped here, and thus the time is thronged with aptness for poems that are still summer-cracked. Interestingly, I never tasted rose hip jelly; we don’t have the custom of using rose hips, in Portugal, and I’m unsure why we never had it, despite it being such an European custom. Your poem is still so tender and loving, and the geometry it establishes with the pictures is delicious, especially since I’m so fond of older pictures. My family was too poor and remote for pictures, which is a bit sad because I don’t have many material memories, and even some names have faded and waned.
Thank you for much for reading and for your thoughtful comments! I was surprised at the number pictures my mother’s family took at the farm in Nova Scotia. I have some earlier pictures taken there as well.
Congratulations !
It’s been wonderful experience to run through the imagery that the poem unfurls as it moves…the legacy carries the sweet smell of life and its simplicity….the innocence of bond…the memories don’t ignite passion but soothe the soul with a sense of belongingness, somewhat alien to the current world….moments flee, and pages burn, life fills the.memories urn….I am native of my memories…it connects me more to myself…perhpas, my own reflections too…
Your poetic work has left a sweet touch on my thoughts…my heart too…
Regards from India
Thank you for your thoughtful, insightful, (and eloqent!) response to “At Summer’s End.” Your comment that “memories soothe the soul with a sense of belongingness, somewhat alien to the current world” is exactly where the poem came from.
Congratulations! It’s a beautiful poem. There’s a haunting feeling (to me)–and I almost expected to find Aunt Etta was a ghost. But I suppose we are haunted by memories.
Thank you very much, Merril. The haunting feeling may be from the passing of place. The Nova Scotia farmhouse is gone, as is the cottage at Hannaford Cove.
Well done. But please, don’t rush the season. It is the one time out of the year when I can relax without fearing cold. Just for the record, freezing (in my book) is anything below 80 F. 😉
Thank you, Lea. I’m glad you enjoyed it. As it happens, I’m of the anything below 80 F. is too cold persuasion as well. (I lived in the South too long.)
So wonderful! I love all old family photographs and the amazing poem !.
I look forward to reading and seeing more.
Take care!
Greetings from the beautiful Rhine-Highlands / Germany …
Rosie 🌺🙂
Wow! Congratulations Liz, a beautiful poem of nature’s spotlight on fond memories. ⚘😊
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Thank you, Suzette! The entire day at Fort Foster had many of those moments for me.
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It’s a beautiful poem and nicely illustrated by your photos. Congratulations, Liz!
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Thank you, Shayne! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and the photos.
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I love those old photographs. Congratulations on having the poem published. I loved it and the pictures make it more real. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Darlene!!
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Congratulations Liz on this poem’s publication. I appreciate reading about summer’s end with the inevitable making of rose hip jelly. This poem encouraged me to read further about this delicacy. I see you live in Vermont, and my wife and I may plan a trip over this way when traveling is more favorable and safe. I think I still have an older cousin living in Vermont.
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Thank you! I bought some rose hip jelly at the store a few years ago, but it was quite insipid compared to the homemade version. I’m working in Vermont (via the Internet), and I graduated from high school there, but I’m living in New Hampshire. I have a younger cousin living in Vermont.
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Congratulations Liz! This is wonderful news. I enjoyed the poem and the old photographs. Thanks for sharing!
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My pleasure, Jill! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and accompanying family photos.
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Lovely poem, Liz; congrats on the publication! These photos are amazing, as well!!!
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Thank you very much, Becky! I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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Congratulations, Liz! A wonderful poem of nature, memory, and family — and what a treasure trove of photos!
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Thank you, Dave! I’m glad you enjoyed them. Both sides of my mother’s family took a lot of photographs, considering the time period.
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Congratulations Liz, it’s a beautiful poem full of vivid memories and nostalgia.
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Thank you for your kind words, Andrea!
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These are wonderful photographs, Liz. You are most fortunate to have them. I am going over to read your poem.
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Thank you, Robbie. I know how fortunate I am to be the Keeper of the Family Archives. This treasure trove of photos has inspired countless stories and poems–and I finished a new tanka just last night!
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Wonderful, I look forward to reading it, Liz.
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Thanks, Robbie!
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Congratulations!!! That’s a wonderful poem enjoyably illustrated by the photos! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up!!
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Thank you for the encouragment, Sue!! It means a lot.
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Congratulations, Liz. It’s a wonderful poem and I’ve so enjoyed the photos and the memories behind it.
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Thank you for your kind words, Mary! I appreciate it.
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Congratulations Liz♥️
Beautiful poem☀️☀️
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Thank you, Sarika!
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Most welcome..Liz❣️
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Beautiful poem Liz. The images were a terrific touch. I enjoyed this post very much.
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Thank you very much, John! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Congratulations Liz to have your poem published. What a great piece to depict the precious memories shown in the photos. Very well done!
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Thank you, Miriam!
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You’re welcome, Liz!
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What a beautiful trip (in words and pictures) down memory lane. And for me, personal memories also—my mother used to love collecting rose hips at the end of August, to make rose hip jelly. Congratulations and thank you, Liz!
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Thank you, Ranee! I’m so glad the poem prompted fond memories of your mother.
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How wonderful!
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Thank you, Nora!
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Congratulations, Liz. Thanks for sharing the lovely photos,
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Thank you, Sharifah. I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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These photos are a real treasure to have in your family archives.
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Yes, they are. I feel very fortunate to have them.
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I enjoyed the photos, too.
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I’m very glad to hear it, thank you!
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Congratulations on your lovely poem, Liz! ❤ Love these photos too…
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Thank you so much, Bette! Both are near and dear to my heart.
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Thank you Liz, for sharing Etta with me. As I looked at the “long-ago” photos and read your word, she came alive to me. I was there with her harvesting the rose hips. You reminded me of the times my father and I would go blueberry picking in Northern Manitoba surrounded by black flies. I thought of how Etta worked over a hot stove to bring forth the precious jelly and thought of my grandmother canning fruit, with the steam filling the kitchen. I love the last days of summer, the time of harvest, the preparation for the long winter days of rest. A beautiful poem, Liz – thank you.
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Oh, Rebecca, I am so glad my poem and photos prompted such fond memories of similar times with your family. (Except for the black flies, of course.)
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Congratulations, Liz. Your poem was full of delicious memories and delicious rosehips. I really loved it. You bear a strong familial resemblance to Etta. I’m sure that has been said before. 🙂
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Thank you, Tracy. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. When I was putting the post together, I was very surprised to see how much I resemble Etta now. No one in the family had remarked on it before.
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Seeing photos helps I think. 🙂
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I truly enjoyed your poem, Liz. The photos are a wonderful collection. Seeing Etta over all the years is really nice.
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Thank you, Jennie! I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem and the photos. I’m going to have to do a little digging into Etta’s life. (I’d started a few years ago and then set it aside.) She emigrated to the US probably in the early 1920s. She ended up running a home for “wayward girls” in Newton, Massachusetts until she retired.
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That should be a great research to do. I was struck by the photo of her with her sisters, thinking that was roughly the same age as my grandmother, too. So, how can I be here in this day and age, yet have a grandmother who lived so very long ago? She was a big part of my life. It is mind boggling.
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I had the same thought going back through the pictures, particuarly the one of Etta and her sisters.
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I know exactly what you mean!
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A beautiful poem supplemented with fascinating photographs
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Thank you, Derrick! I’m so glad you enjoyed them.
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Congratulations
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Thank you!
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This is a beautiful poem filled with evocative imagery and rich symbolism! I was especially taken with your intentional, repeated use of “memory,” especially of “memory at cliff’s edge,” and “Unexpectedly signaling the end.” Your great, low sprawls of dusty bushes juxtaposed with the brilliant crimson rose hips is wonderful. I can see it. I also love how you blended your memories with your mother’s, and the image of your mother looking down from the dormer at Aunt Etta from the beginning of the preserving work is precious. Your poem is a family legacy in itself, even without all the wonderful photos you’ve included! Thank you for making it available to us. With each reading I see something more…
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Oh, my goodness, Mary Jo, thank you so much for your kind words! They mean a lot. Part of what is so important about writing poems like this one is to preserve those places and people as they were. I need to do it for myself, but you’re right, they can be passed down as a family legacy.
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Congratulations! Well deserved. Thank you also for this photo gallery – so many stories here.
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Thank you, V.J.! I’m glad you enjoyed them. And yes, there are many, many more stories to be told.
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You are welcome. I know any of those stories would be safe in your hands.
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Thanks. 🙂
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Congratulations, Liz on your lovely poem being published. Through your treasured photos I could see Aunt Etta collecting the rosehips. ❤️
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Thank you, Jane. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and Aunt Etta’s role in it.
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I reflected back in (Summers End) to Mary Agnes and I walking the ridge above Penobscot Bay, Northport, ME, many years ago on family vacations. Grandson David graduated from Champlain in May of 2017. He has been with Viacom in NYC and doing quite well with his Champlain education in the Audio – Video field. You help to continue my education Lis. You forever make me look up word meanings, ellipsis sent me there this trip. You a Navy wife, Mary Agnes a Marine Corps wife.
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Thank you for reading and sharing the reflections the post prompted. I’m glad to hear that David’s Champlain education has served him so well.
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Congratulations! I love the poem, very redolent of the end of Summer in Egnland too. The photo of Etta & her sisters is wonderful.
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Thank you, Caroline! I’m glad you enjoyed the pictures and the poem.
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Love these Pictures!!!
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Thank you, Andy!
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Congratulations, Liz. Your words make the photos come alive. Kudos!
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Thank you very much, Ron!!
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Congratulations with your poem, I loved looking at your photographs they being the characters I sometimes portray to real life settings.
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Thank you very much, Charlotte! I’m glad you emjoyed them.
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Liz, congratulations! A wonderful poem and I switched back and forth with your photographs here – an ideal accompaniment to your words! Precious memories beautifully recalled – well done!
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Thank you very much, Annika! I’m so glad you enjoyed the poem and the photos.
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Amazing poem, Liz. I browsed the photos first and then read the poem. It gave me the good kind of chills. So beautiful and touching. ❤
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Thank you so much, Diana!! I’m glad you enjoyed the experience.
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Congratulations! And I love that you’ve included the process with your poem. Cheers!
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Thank you, Cecelia! I’m never quite sure how much writing process I should include with these posts.
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Congratulations on getting your poem published! Your photos are most interesting!
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Thank you very much, Dwight!
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Congrats, Liz!
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Thank you, Mitch!
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Congratulations!, (though I’m excruciatingly late). Summer just snapped here, and thus the time is thronged with aptness for poems that are still summer-cracked. Interestingly, I never tasted rose hip jelly; we don’t have the custom of using rose hips, in Portugal, and I’m unsure why we never had it, despite it being such an European custom. Your poem is still so tender and loving, and the geometry it establishes with the pictures is delicious, especially since I’m so fond of older pictures. My family was too poor and remote for pictures, which is a bit sad because I don’t have many material memories, and even some names have faded and waned.
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Thank you for much for reading and for your thoughtful comments! I was surprised at the number pictures my mother’s family took at the farm in Nova Scotia. I have some earlier pictures taken there as well.
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Congratulations !
It’s been wonderful experience to run through the imagery that the poem unfurls as it moves…the legacy carries the sweet smell of life and its simplicity….the innocence of bond…the memories don’t ignite passion but soothe the soul with a sense of belongingness, somewhat alien to the current world….moments flee, and pages burn, life fills the.memories urn….I am native of my memories…it connects me more to myself…perhpas, my own reflections too…
Your poetic work has left a sweet touch on my thoughts…my heart too…
Regards from India
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Thank you for your thoughtful, insightful, (and eloqent!) response to “At Summer’s End.” Your comment that “memories soothe the soul with a sense of belongingness, somewhat alien to the current world” is exactly where the poem came from.
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Congratulations! It’s a beautiful poem. There’s a haunting feeling (to me)–and I almost expected to find Aunt Etta was a ghost. But I suppose we are haunted by memories.
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Thank you very much, Merril. The haunting feeling may be from the passing of place. The Nova Scotia farmhouse is gone, as is the cottage at Hannaford Cove.
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Oh, perhaps. . .that’s too bad. It’s good you have photos.
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Yes, I’m grateful that my family took them–and kept them until they made their way to me.
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Congratulations! What great photos! ❤️
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Excellent work, Liz. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Amazing poem with beautiful pictorial representations. Congratulations Liz. Pls do check out my new blog at https://dailycrosswalk.com
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Thank you.
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Congratulations, Liz! I love the way you use old family photographs for inspiration.
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Thank you, Mary! Family photographs have been the inspiration for a lot of my fiction as well.
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Congratulations from me too on having your poem published! A beautiful post.
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Thank you very much, Diana!
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Well done. But please, don’t rush the season. It is the one time out of the year when I can relax without fearing cold. Just for the record, freezing (in my book) is anything below 80 F. 😉
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Thank you, Lea. I’m glad you enjoyed it. As it happens, I’m of the anything below 80 F. is too cold persuasion as well. (I lived in the South too long.)
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So wonderful! I love all old family photographs and the amazing poem !.
I look forward to reading and seeing more.
Take care!
Greetings from the beautiful Rhine-Highlands / Germany …
Rosie 🌺🙂
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Thank you, Rosie! I’m so glad you enjoyed the photos and poem. It’s good to meet you!
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🌺😁🦋❤🌺
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Nice poem (and memories), Liz! Very much like the last few lines in particular, contrasting summer’s taste to a later season’s bite.
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Thank you, Brett! It’s good to hear from you. How have you been? Any new posts in the offing for O’ Canada?
When I wrote the poem, I didn’t expect it to end where it did.
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Congratulations Liz! What a treat, both the poem and the pictures! Nature’s bounty.
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Thank you very much, Sonia! I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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