

The Inspiration
I wrote this poem several years ago after attending Christmas Eve services with my brother and his family. (I’d been away from the Church for a while.) The purity of the children’s voices singing in Latin behind me left me so awestruck I was afraid to turn around.
*from St. Luke’s Facebook Timeline, January 8, 2014
Very thought-provoking, Liz. Church on Christmas Eve always makes me feel like crying. Too many memories.
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Thank you, Becky. This post is bittersweet for me, as my brother died in 2017.
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I’m so sorry, Liz! I hope it helps you to write about him.
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Yes, writing about him helps keep his spirit alive.
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That’s a blessing.
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Must have sounded like angels singing, they were. I miss the mass being in Latin.
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It sure seemed like angels singing.
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That brings back memories. Thanks so much for sharing. I knew a priest who went there back in the 80s but I can’t remember his last name. Covid brain I guess. Lol.
Merry Christmas!
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Margo Lee! Merry Christmas to you and your family!!
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You too!
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Thanks!
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Midnight Mass on Christmas Eve. It will seem quite odd missing that annual tradition this year. I go way back as an altar boy, Liz. Thanks for this memory.
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Hi Pete, when I was a small girl of about 7, I desperately wanted to be an altar boy. Of course, I couldn’t be one because I was a girl. My aunt dressed me up in a white sheet and let me be an altar boy at home.
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You’re welcome, Pete! I’m glad the post prompted a good memory for you.
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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this, Elizabeth
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You’re welcome! Thank you for reading and commenting!!
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Beautiful image created in this verse.
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Thank you! I’m glad the poem evoked the scene for you.
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Your words and the photo and my own memories combined beautifully.
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I’m so glad to hear it, Audrey! Thank you for telling me.
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You’re welcome, Liz. Childhood Christmas memories are worth revisiting.
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They definitely are.
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Liz, I get goosebumps reading your poem and know exactly the feeling! No, I wouldn’t turn around either, just let the ethereal sound carry me away, living in the transcendental moment,
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Thank you for letting me know that you, too, have experienced these transcendent moments, Annika.
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Beautiful poem!! ❤
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Thank you, Sue!
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We used to sing in Latin when I was at school at the convent. I always enjoyed Catholic services as I love the tradition and solemnness as well as the discipline and order. If I do go to church, which isn’t that often because the church doesn’t embrace some things that I believe in, then I do to a Catholic service.
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Thank you, Robbie. This was an Episcopal (Anglican) service. High Church Episcopalians would have traditions closer to Roman Catholicism; Low Church would be closer to the Methodists. (Hard to tell the players without a score care!)
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Hi LIz, thanks for confirming. My sons attend an Anglican school so I know their services are quite close to the Catholic services. I enjoy Anglican services too.
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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Beautifully done. At my Jesuit Grammar School we sang in Latin. I doubt it would have been as beautiful as you describe
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Thank you, Derrick! From your Jesuit Grammar School comment, I’m picturing a group of fidgety little boys nudging and pinching each other as they try not to giggle.
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Indeed. The worst bit was singing for ‘ our souls ‘ 🙂
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Beautiful, Liz! It brought a lump to my throat. Meryl
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Thank you, Meryl. I’m so pleased you were moved by it.
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Just recently we watched a special on PBS where a children’s choir sang in Latin. It was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem, Liz.
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Thank you very much, Jill! I’m glad you enjoyed it. The PBS special sounds lovely.
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Hi, Liz. Thanks for bringing this poem back into the light. Beautifully penned and invoking such memories. Ah, those Christmas memories; adorned, in decorated churches, Christmas plays and the sound of ‘angelic’ choristers as well as the ‘not so angelic’ filling the nave.
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Hi, Goff. I’m glad the poem brought back Christmas memories for you. (We can ignore the “not so angelic” in the nave for the time being. ;))
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Ah, yes; and, why not; it is Christmas after all. Have a Very Merry Christmas.
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Liz, your poetic words beautifully captured a transcendent moment.
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Thank you, Dave. I’m very glad to hear it!
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I agree wholeheartedly, Dave!
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Thank you, Rebecca!
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A beautiful poem, Liz. Wishing you a wonderful Chritmas!
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Thank you, Darlene! I wish you a wonderful Christmas as well!!
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Just the other day, I said that it just didn’t feel like Christmas. Thanks for correcting me!
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You’re most welcome, Ron!
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I used to prefer the mass in Latin. Oh well, that’s progress.

Stay safe, Liz!!
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Thanks, GP, you, too!
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I went to a convent school too, and most of our hymns were in Latin. I always enjoyed singing in Latin, and as a side bonus, I find myself able to understand language better because of the many Latin roots.
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Yes, I took four Latin courses in college, and they helped a great deal with both vocabulary and grammar.
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The glory of the unexpected.
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That’s a good way to put it, thanks, V.J.!
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A perfect poem for the season. I can hear them now!
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Thank you, Eilene! I’m so glad the poem created the scene for you.
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A beautiful poem, Liz. Growing up it was a major faux pas to turn around and look to the back of the church. That has stuck with me to this day. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
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Thank you, John. In the churches where I grew up, the choir was always in the front, which may be partly why hearing the singing coming from behind me made such an impression.
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Ours were always in the back. Hence the sin in turning around.
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I love medieval music! Have a wonderful holiday, Liz!
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Thank you, Shayne! I hope you have a wonderful holiday as well!!
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Lovely poem, Liz 🙂 I believe this is the one you mentioned to me the other day. I can feel the goose bumps.
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Thank you, Chris. Yes, this is the poem I mentioned to you the other day. 🙂
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Congratulations, Liz! https://experimentsinfiction.com/2020/12/23/eif-childhood-poetry-challenge-the-results/
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Thank you very much, Ingrid!
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P.S., I sent you an email about a post I’m putting together for Wednesday 30th. It could be in your spam. Do take a look if you would like to get involved, otherwise no worries!
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I just responded to your email, thank you!
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It must have been beautiful. That’s a lovely church, too. It looks like it could be in an English village.
My daughters were in concert choir and madrigals–and they also took Latin 7th-12th grades, so when they were in high school, I did hear singing in Latin! 😀
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Yes, it was beautiful. The older Episcopal churches in New England do have that English village feel to them. How wonderful that you have heard your own children singing in Latin!
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My son had to drop college Latin to keep from failing it. I’ll send this to him.
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Hopefully, it won’t bring back bad memories. 😉
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A sense of the sacred suffuses your poem. It was never so much that Latin in itself was holy or mystical; it was that it was ancient and traditional. Until I took Latin in high school I had little idea what most words meant, but it felt sacred long before that. The seeming ambivalence of turning to see the faces of that ‘angels” choir is deeply evoked. Simply lovely, Liz.
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments, Mary Jo. I’m glad you appreciated the message of the poem–or, should I say, the experience of the poem.
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Venite adoremus!
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Pax vobiscum!
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Gratulor tibi, Liz, on this wonderful and winning poem!
Season’s greetings to you!
Nick.
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Thank you so very much, Nick!! Season’t greetings to you as well!
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I had sung Latin often in my younger age, Liz. I still remember singing “Gloria.” I love listening to Children’s choir of their pure, violin like voices. Enjoyed reading your poem. I surely understand your feeling. 💖
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Thank you, Miriam. I’m glad the feeling of the poem resonated with you.
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This is beautiful, Liz. You don’t hear songs in Latin much anymore but they sound so elegant.
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Thank you, Chris!
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Beautiful, Liz… Thanks so much for sharing. 💞
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You’re welcome, Bette! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Lovely. Felicem natalem Christi, Liz!
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Thank you, Mitch! Merry Christmas to you, too!
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such beautiful faces in my mind when reading your poetry Liz! ❤️
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Thank you, Cindy! I’m glad the poem evoked the scene for you.
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You’re so welcome Liz! me too! ❤️
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Lovely poem, Liz ! When was the last time, I heard children singing in Latin? Well so many years ago, that I was singing with them, as part of the Montreal’s Mile-End Saint Michel’s Church / Luke Callahan School boys choir. Though so many years ago, these are experiences we never forget. I really enjoyed your post because it brought back so many old and carefree memories.
Thank you for that !
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You’re most welcome, Jean-Jacques! I’m so glad the poem brought back old and carefree memories for you.
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That brought back memories Liz.. very evocative. As a small child on Christmas Day we would attend the service in the Cathedral just five minutes from the house.. I didn’t understand what the choir was singing but remember it was beautiful.. Merry Christmas..
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I’m so glad the post brought back good memories for you, Sally! Merry Christmas.
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You’ve given us such an evocative sense of being there that I could feel chills down my spine, and I heard the voices in my head. I’ve racked my brain, and I can’t remember a time when I’ve attended this type of performance in person; but even the filmed versions I’ve watched have moved me deeply.
In fact, thanks to this perfect Christmas Eve post (which I deliberately waited until Dec. 24 to read), I’m off to YouTube to find children singing in Latin.
Merry Christmas, Liz.
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Oh, thank you, Ranee! I’m so pleased by your response. Enjoy the children singing in Latin. Pax vobiscum.
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Do we dare? Ah, Liz – that was the high point of your words. Do we dare to look, to experience, to embrace, to enjoy, to love. Those three words – do we dare – I will take with me into 2021.
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Thank you, Rebecca. And unlike our poor friend Prufrock, our answer will be yes.
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Thanks Liz.
Wish I could have been there.
Stay safe and warm,
Jim Made Up Stories
On Tue, Dec 22, 2020 at 6:24 PM Elizabeth Gauffreau wrote:
> Liz Gauffreau posted: ” The Inspiration I wrote this poem several years > ago after attending Christmas Eve services with my brother and his family. > (I’d been away from the Church for a while.) The purity of the children’s > voices singing in Latin behind me left me so awestruc” >
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Thank you, Jim!!
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Thank you for transmitting this feeling so beautifully, Liz!
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Thank you, Therese! I’m so glad the feeling carried through.
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Beautiful, Liz.
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Thank you, Mark.
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A children’s choir, singing in a church with great acoustics, is a beautiful sound. The clarity and purity of their voices is a precious sound, especially in Latin. Your poem captures that feeling, Liz.
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Thank you, Jennie. I’m so glad you think so.
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You are very welcome, Liz.
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This is beautiful, Liz, and brings out the true Christmas spirit! Merry Christmas!
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Thank you, Eugenia! I hope you had a good Christmas.
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Most welcome. Liz!
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A very beautiful poem Liz. It looks like a wonderful experience! I don’t think I have ever heard children singing in Latin. I have been in choirs where a song or two was done in Latin! I love the intensity of this poem.
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight. I’m so glad the poem conveyed the intensity of the experience and that you enjoyed it!
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yes, well done!
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Beautiful poem, Liz, it brings to mind the feelings of something very special that makes you want to break the rules/norms ~ such moments are beautifully rare. And nice to have your poem remind me of such feelings.
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Thank you very much. These moments of transcending rules and norms are very rare. I’m glad the poem reminded you of such feelings.
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Lovely poem! Children singing in a quiet church has often brought me to tears. It is as if the angels were there leading the choir. I believe that they are. We have much to learn from children. The gifts that move us and touch our souls have so little to do with material things. Simple gifts given in the spirit of love are what matters; it could be a song, a smile when you so desperately need one, a hand that reaches out to hold your own trembling fingers in a crisis. Children instinctively know how to be ‘present’ with others. They do not need to time-travel ahead in terms of worrying about the future. Nor, do they live in the past. I am glad that writing about your brother brings you comfort…our beloveds live forever in our hearts.
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I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, Linda. I greatly appreciate your thoughtful comments. It’s pretty amazing to think that all chldren really want from the adults in their lives is their time and attention, such a seemingly simple gift that’s too often hard to give.
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So true!
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Christmas is not just a time for festivity and merry making. It is more than that. It is a time for the contemplation of eternal things. The Christmas spirit is a spirit of giving and forgiving.” ~ J. C. Penney
Have a wonderful Christmas and joyous days ahead with warm laughter. Take care.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Kally! I apologize for my delay in responding. I found you comment in the spam folder. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas.
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How lovely, Liz. Though I don’t attend any kind of religious services, the music feels sacred. Beautiful poem and memory.
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Thank you very much, Diana! I’m glad you enjoyed the post. I hope you had a good Christmas.
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How lovely, Liz. It really evokes a past Christmas for me.
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Thank you, Luanne! I’m so glad.
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Lovely! We’ve been watching church on TV these days–I do miss a live choir–maybe next year for us. 🙂
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Thank you, Cecelia! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
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