
My Review
Merril D. Smith’s debut collection is poetry of the felt but unseen, those moments in life when we feel in touch with something greater than ourselves to which only poetry can give voice. Even then, we can never fully understand it. We just know it’s there, a form of faith we never knew we needed.
The title poem, “River Ghosts,” introduces the idea that our sensory experience of the natural world–”dusty grass,” “a gull’s laugh,” “cloud-light shimmering,” “spring-scented rain”–can evoke memories and dreams we thought we’d forgotten. However, it becomes apparent after reading the entire collection that we can only hear a “whisper in that dusty grass” if we are attuned to the wavelength on which it travels.
Smith does not limit her experience of the natural world to earth and water. A number of the poems look skyward to find hope, “the stardust / that connect us all” (“Ghost Links”).
Smith uses a variety of forms in the collection, including free verse, metered and rhymed verse, prose poem, and ekphrasis. In addition to demonstrating her mastery of craft, this variety of forms also follows the many moods of a river, depending on the season and the time of day.
Along with river imagery, the collection is structured to emphasize the fluidity of time and memory, with past, present, and future emerging, submerging, and emerging once again, often through the vehicle of love and grief.
River Ghosts ends with the standout of the collection for me–”Half-Concealed and Half-Revealed”–which begins “How will we remember these days / of grief and sorrow for our world.” As much as I would love to quote the last stanza and describe how it moved me, I won’t. I want readers to experience it for themselves.
Readers who appreciate contemplative poetry that evokes insights into their own experience in the world–as well as the experience of those different from themselves in time, place, or circumstance–will relish this collection and return to it often.
The Poet
Merril D. Smith lives near the Delaware River in southern New Jersey with her husband and cat. She has a doctorate in American history from Temple University in Philadelphia. Her nonfiction books focus on history, gender, and sexuality. She turned to poetry as a creative outlet several years ago, and her poetry has been published in a variety of literary magazines. River Ghosts is her first full-length poetry book.
The Inspiration
River Ghosts was compiled a few months after my mom died. During that time, when the world was mostly shut down, I’d walk to the river in the early morning, think about how she had lived on the other side of the river, and toss a stone in the water and watch the ripples grow. Some of the poems were composed during that time, but many of them were written before, but seemed to fit. So, many of the poems in the collection were not written with the collection in mind.
This was over two years ago. (There were delays because the publisher had some health issues.) I think my poetry style has changed some from when these were written.
Artist’s Statement
Click on the heading above for Merril’s artist’s statement.
The River
Merril is an avid photographer, capturing the many moods of the Delaware River on her early morning walks. She is very generous about sharing her photographs on Instagram (@mdsmithnj) and on her blog, Yesterday and today: Merril’s Historical Musings. I’ve been flagging my favorites for a while now. Because the river plays such an integral part of River Ghosts, I’ve created a video homage to the river and the book it inspired. I hope you enjoy it!
Wonderful review, Liz. I love the title as we have lots of ghosts and live near the river.
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It is such a wonderful review. Thank you about the title. Rivers are very special, and I suspect they all carry ghosts.
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As I mentioned we get a lot of ghosts. Kleptomaniac ghosts. Our cats can see them. We can hear and smell them. Our property is against the ditches and river, and it’s scary at night. La Llorona, el Cuco, Chupacabra and other monsters hang out along the river and visit out property at night.
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That sounds scary. I think the ghosts around here are mostly benign.
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I presented a paper at the NeMLA conference last year on La Llorona. She is deeply seated in the irrigation culture I grew up with. I still irrigate like I have all my life and the way the Spanish did 300 years ago. La Llorona is often a big help when I’m out at 2:00 am tending to the water.
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Always good to have her on your side.
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For sure.
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Thank you, Tim. I agree that the title is very evocative. The cover is wonderful as well.
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What a beautiful description of this lovely book!
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Thank you very much, Dorothy! The book was a real pleasure to read, so many lines to savor.
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This is a great review that makes me really want to read this collection! The cover style also draws me in.
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Thank you, Bonnie. I agree about the cover. I hope you will read the book. I think you’d enjoy it.
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Another great review Liz. Sounds like a wonderful anthology.
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Thank you, Goff. It is!
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Pleasure. Have a great day.
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Thanks, Goff–you, too!
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Hi Liz, thanks for this lovely review. I have read and enjoyed some of Merrill’s lovely poetry on her blog.
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Thank you so much. I’m so pleased with this review, too!
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You’re welcome, Robbie. Writing a review of such evocative and relatable poetry was a real pleasure.
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An excellent review, Liz. Congratulations to Merrill.
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Thank you so much, John!
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Thank you, John.
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Such a wonderful review that makes me think about the valdes in life and how those who have passed are remembered.
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Valdes = values (autocorrect did that 😉)
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Thank you, Thérèse! That’s exactly what the collection evoked in me.
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This was just the transcendence I needed on a morning when I’m wrestling with the mundane. Liz, the creativity of your review beautifully reflects the creativity of the book itself. Thank you.
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Thank you, Ranee! I’m glad I was able to provide a transcendental moment for you. They’re hard to come by these days, which is why I’m so glad I’ve started reading a lot of poetry again.
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Terrific review, Liz — giving us a sense of the poet in your words, in her words, and in images.
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Thank you, Dave. That’s what I was aiming for. (Since being introduced to the concept of rich media by a work colleague, I’ve been very taken with that approach to communication, particuarly online communication.)
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You are a “rich media” expert, Liz!
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Why, thank you, Dave!
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Oh my, Liz! What a treat this is. Such a careful, thoughtful review. You revealed things I didn’t even know were there. I can’t thank you enough–and that video! Wow, I love it so much. Thank you, thank you! 💙
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You’re most welcome, Merril! I was hoping to do the book justice.
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What a lovely thing to say, Liz. You did–and more!
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Reblogged this on Yesterday and today: Merril's historical musings and commented:
Elizabeth Gauffreau has written such a thoughtful review of my poetry book, River Ghosts–and she even made a video! 💙
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Thank you for the reblog, Merril!
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Of course, Liz! Thank you for the review! 💙
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What a wonderful review, complete with a video of Merril’s photographs! You rock, Liz!
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Thank you very much, Marie! I’m glad you enjoyed my presentation of River Ghosts.
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Fantastic review and video, Liz! Congratulations to Merril! I loved her Dear Reader letter…so moving.
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Thank you, Jill. I’m glad you appreciated Merril’s Dear Reader letter. I was hoping people would click over to read it.
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An excellent job on the review, Liz!
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Thank you very much, GP!
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Interesting comment Liz. From another scribbler of sorts, sad for they though, who have not managed to be in touch with something greater than oneself…!
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Thank you, Jean-Jacques. I agree with feeling a certain sadness for those who haven’t managed to be in touch with something greater than themselves.
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Beautiful review, photos and video homage… Congratulations and best wishes, Merrill D. Smith!
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Thank you, Bette!
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That is such a wonderful review, Liz, in depth and from the heart. Thank you, my dear friend.
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You’re most welcome, Marina. Writing the review and sharing it with others was my pleasure.
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Oh, I can see that! 🙏🤗
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This is a beautiful review of Merril’s book. Your highlights and quotes are a perfect segue into the book.
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I love the beautiful video you made of the river!
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Thank you, Dwight! I’m glad you enjoyed the video. Merril takes such good photos, I wanted to do something with them.
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That was a great way to show them!
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Thank you very much, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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Liz, aside from the sensitive review(s) you write, such as this one, I have just watched the wonderful Vimeos and Videos you make. Brava! They SO evocatively capture your subject. (Is the music yours?) continue…
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Thank you, Tony. Most of the music is from freesound.org. (I need to do a better job of attribution.)
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Nice review!!
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Thank you, Sue!
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You write beautiful reviews, Liz, and I loved the video homage to the river and the book. The inspiration for some of Merril’s poems was touching, and the collection sounds personal as well as deeply resonant. Thanks so much for sharing and many congrats to Merril for the wonderful review. 🙂
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Thank you very much, Diana, for your thoughtful comments on my review. The book is very deeply resonant for me.
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Merril is a treasure. (K)
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She certainly is!
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I read poetry the way an academic often reads poetry, analytically. You, Liz, wrote this review from “the inside out,” so to speak–from the point of view of a poet yourself. Excellent!
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You’re right, Marian. I definitely approached this review from the affective domain!
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Wonderful review, beautiful video!
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Thank you, Priscilla! (Sorry about the delayed response. Your comment was in my spam folder.
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Thank you, Liz for another wonderful review and follow-up discussion. I just downloaded River Ghosts and have already become engrossed in Merril’s poetic language. I had to add this short poem called Syncopation:
“Clouds raced
across the night sky,
we watched them
together,
heartbeats in syncopation,
the stars dancing on.”
I am dancing with you, Merril!
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You’re welcome, Rebecca! I’m so glad my review prompted you to download River Ghosts and join the dance.
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Such a beautiful tribute to Merril Liz! 💖
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Thank you, Cindy!
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You’re so welcome Liz! 💖
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A splendid and thorough review, Liz. An especially good touch to make the video for the reason you have – Merril’s photography is an integral part of her work.
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Thank you so much for your insightful comments, Derrick!
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What a wonderful review Liz! Also, what a beautiful cover page ❤ 😀
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Thank you, Damyanti. I agree about the beautiful cover.
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A lovely review, Liz! You have made me want to buy the book. I’m going on Amazon now to look for it. Meryl
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You’re welcome, Meryl! I’m so glad you will be getting the book!!
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It’s done! M
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FANTASTIC REVIEW!
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Thank you very much!
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I really enjoyed your thoughtful review, Liz. That, together with the delightful video you made (so clever) are sending me straight over to Amazon via Merril’s blog. Thank you for the introduction!
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Thank you very much, Chris! I’m so glad you will be reading River Ghosts.
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Beautiful images–the music is perfect for it. Love the foggy ending.
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Thank you very much, Jacqui!
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Sounds so beautiful. I just checked it on Amazon and added it to my cart.
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Wonderful!! I’m so glad!
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A wonderful review, Liz! Congrats and much success to Merril! I adore the cover of her new book!
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Thank you, Eugi! I love the cover, too.
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You’re welcome, Liz!
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks for this fantastic review, Liz! The video is also great for explaination. I’ve recently found that I’m reading more and more poetry, and I must have this too. Best wishes, Michael
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You’re welcome, Michael! I’m so glad to hear that you’re reading more poetry!!
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Thanks, Liz! Yes, is very entertaining and widening the mind. xx Michael
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Lovely review!!!! The review itself is so beautifully written. A mirror of the book, perhaps?
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I’d like to think so, thanks! 😀
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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There is something about nature and poetry that goes hand in hand. This is one book of poetry that’s just made my TBR. Your review is poetic and well crafted, Liz.
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Thank you so much, Mark! I’m glad you will be reading River Ghosts.
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Great review….thanks for sharing…
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You’re welcome. Thanks for reading!
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This is brilliant, because those feelings that provoke images and memories can only be explained (that is a terrible word, but it fits) through poetry. Liz, you write the best reviews. Really.
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Thank you very much, Jennie. You are so right about poetry.
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You’re welcome, Liz.
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Nice
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Thanks!
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Another lovely review! Yes, the sensory experiences really do have a way of tethering us to memories in such profound ways.
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Thank you, Cecelia!
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Liz, this is such a beautiful review!
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Thank you very much, Luanne!
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Wonderful
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Thank you.
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This is a great review, Liz. It is articulate and succinct.
Your video tribute is lovely!
Merril deserves this.
Her poetry is amazing, and as you point out the devices and styles expose her ability, brilliantly.
Congratulations, Merril! 🌹💙
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Thank you very much, Resa!
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Thank you for the excellent review, Liz. I love what you said, Merril wrote about “those moments in life when we feel in touch with something greater than ourselves to which only poetry can give voice.” The video is beautiful. Congratulations to Merril!
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You’re welcome, Miriam! I’m so glad you enjoyed the post. River Ghosts is a wonderful collection.
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A fine review of this amazing writer, poet, and photographer. Merrill’s work is unsurpassed in its perfection. Thank you and congratulations Merril. 💙
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You’re welcome. Thank you for reading!
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A lovely review with great depictions of writing styles and spiritual feels. The unsean world undoubtedly thrives in the deepness of our hearts as we embrace the mysteries of nature. A beautiful title too.
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Thank you!
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