
The Best Laid Plans . . .
I had planned to post my own poetry this week, but as soon as I read Derek Ross’s poem “Storm,” I just had to read it aloud and record it. The poem affected me that much.
Call-and-Response
Derek Ross is a first-rate poet and photographer from Scotland. As this is a call-and-response post, in which a fellow blogger’s post has inspired my own, I encourage you to spend some time on Derek’s site: Photos-Poems-Haiku. There will be a bit of jiggery-pokery involved. (All in good fun, of course!)

I’m having trouble playing it on my iPhone. I’m going to try on the laptop at lunchtime. That painting is wonderful.
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I was able to access it on the laptop. I enjoyed your reading very much.
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I’m so glad, Bonnie! Thank you!!
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When I was putting the post together, I’m glad I thought to check for relevant public domain art on the Art Institute of Chicago’s website.
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Great tip!
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Thanks! I love museums!!
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reminds me of a Wintery day out at the beach. Back home we call days like this “poor canoeing weather”.
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I’ll say it’s “poor canoeing weather”!
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Ah, Liz, how beautifully recited!
I wouldn’t mind some “cacophony” right now to break up the heat! 😉
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Thank you so much, Marina!
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You’re very welcome, Liz!!! 🤗❤
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A beautiful reading, Liz! I love the Winslow Homer paintings, too.
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Thank you, Merril! I lucked out finding the Winslow Homer paintings.
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You’re welcome, Liz. They worked perfectly!
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🙂
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I enjoyed your reading of this poem. Beautifully done! Love the why the birds are not intimidated by the storm! That space between storms is what we all wait for in our lives! I love Winslow Homer’s paintings.
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Thank you very much, Dwight! I’m so glad you enjoyed the post. I’m a big fan of Winslow Homer’s paintings as well.
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Yes, I did! You are welcome!
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Hi Liz, your reading of the beautiful poem is wonderful. Thanks for introducing me to Derek Ross.
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Thank you very much, Robbie! I’m a big fan of Derek’s work.
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Great start with the title–Storm. You have a good, mellow reading voice.
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Thank you very much, Jacqui!
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That really IS a beautiful poem. I like how he breaks his first lines of each stanza, lending more power for the call to pause and listen for the lulls in the storm.
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I, too, was very impressed by his line breaks.
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Hi Liz. A lovely poem, beautifully read too! I’ve just taken a look at some more of Derek Ross’ work and I’m grateful for the new recommendation. Meryl
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Thank you, Meryl! I’m so glad to hear that you explored more of Derek’s work.
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Your voice, the poem, the sound of the ocean, the birds…lovely, Liz.
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Thank you, Jill! I’m so glad you enjoyed my reading of Derek’s poem.
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Very compelling
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Thank you, Joy.
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Thanks so much for doing the reading Liz. This is a beautiful post. Hugs on the wing!
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You’re welcome, Teagan–and thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed the post.
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Wonderful. Your recitation was lovely.
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Thank you very much, Tim!
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You are very welcome, Liz.
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Excellent poem and reading, Liz.
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Thank you, John.
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Excellent poem, recitation, and sound effects!!!
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Thank you very much, Dave!
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Wow! A great poem and you read it so well.
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Thank you very much, Darlene! Some poems just cry out to be read aloud. “Storm” was one of them.
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I love that ending, Liz.
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I agree with you about the ending, GP. A call of hope is so needed these days.
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Desperately!
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As usual Liz, you do this ominous yet hopeful poem justice with your sensitive reading of it. continue…
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Thank you very much, Tony. I tried to be conscientious about respecting Derek’s line breaks.
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Wonderful reading of “Storm”, including the sound effects!
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Thank you very much, Hien! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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So love this!
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Thank you very much, Valerie!
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A beautiful reading, Liz. And the art was such an appropriate match.
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Thank you, Steven. I lucked out finding the art so quickly.
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. That doesn’t happen often. Congratulations. 🙂
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That’s for sure!
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Quite evocative and quite Scottish (two things I enjoy!). I was on the Oregon coast last week, where the wildness always makes me think of Scotland. And this poem made me think of both. Thanks, Liz.
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I’m glad you enjoyed Derek’s poem, Ranee! I’m very taken with his poetry and his photography, particularly his black-and-white studies of old churches.
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Oh, I need to take a closer look at his photography. I love black-and-white photos of place, and I can see why you’d like the churches! Thanks again, Liz.
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You’re welcome, Ranee!
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Well-written by Derek and well-read by you, Liz!
What tools do you use to create the sound file?
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Thanks, Audrey! I recorded my reading in my recording studio (boom mic and pop filter in the master bedroom closet) using GarageBand on an old MacBook Pro. I edited the file in Camtasia on a PC. The sound effects are from freesounds.org.
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Thanks for the info, Liz!
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You’re welcome, Audrey!
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Great poem, Derek and Liz, I love your reading. ❤
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Thank you, Jane! I’m glad you enjoyed my reading of Derek’s poem.
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A marvellous metaphor very well great. Great choice of illustrations, too
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Thank you, Derrick. Derek is very skilled with metaphor.
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That first great should have been read
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Such a powerful poem and your reading of it was beautiful!
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Thank you, Linda! I’m so glad you enjoyed my reading of Derek’s poem.
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I enjoyed that very much, Liz. I listened to it once and then the second time, I closed my eyes so I could feel it too.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my reading of Derek’s poem, Tracy!
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A beautiful reading, Liz, and the Winslow Homer paintings are the perfect compliments.
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Thank you very much, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Liz!
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Nice paintings, dear Liz
Bernhard
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Love this, Liz. Reminds me of Rosemarry’s poems. The flicker of hope in the noise. So much like Neruda’s Keeping Quiet. And your rendition with the chirping of birds is lovely.
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Thank you very much, Sonia! I’m glad you enjoyed my rendition of Derek’s wonderful poem.
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FABULOUS, Liz!! I loved your recitation and had goosebumps!! Sorry I’m so late – we have been having intermittent internet problems. This post made my day. Thank you!
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I’m so glad you enjoyed my recitation of Derek’s wonderful poem, Rebecca!
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Your recitation was so powerful that I felt the storm at my window.
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You’ve put together a sensual post, Liz. I can almost taste the salt spray, even!
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Thank you so much, Eilene!
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Wonderful poem and reading! I especially like Winslow Homer’s art to complement the poem.
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Thank you, Jennie! I lucked out finding the accompanying paintings in a very short period of time.
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They were perfect! Best to you, Liz.
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I saw your post on my phone but couldn’t respond to it. The painting is intensely beautiful. The poem has such great contrast between the storm and birds chirping. We watched a nature documentary about birds. They have a task to fulfill no matter how violent the waves might be. Your reading of the poem with the sound effect is wonderful, Liz. Thank you for the treat.
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You’re most welcome, Miriam! I’m so glad you enjoyed the post.
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I love your reading voice, Liz. Would you do me a huge favor? When you post the review for my poetry book, would you record Rowing the Boat and post it along with the review! I would love it.
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Sure, Miriam. I’d be happy to!
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Yay, Liz! I’m so happy!
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I loved your reading, and the painting is so beautiful! ❤
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Thank you very much!
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That was just wonderful!! Thank you!!
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You’re welcome, Sue! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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Thought you might be interested in this, Liz.
https://charlesfrenchonwordsreadingandwriting.wordpress.com/2022/07/11/its-time-for-a-july-self-promotion-party/
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Thank you, GP! I’ve been following Charles’s blog for a while, and I’m very appreciative of his monthly promotion opportunities.
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I think we sometimes come across posts just as we need them. This one certainly strikes a chord. Wonderful reading and thanks for sharing. Love the artwork
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I think you’re right about coming across posts when we need them. I’ve had the same experience. I’m glad my post struck a responsive chord for you.
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Brava Liz! Nicely done with your spoken words accompanied by stormy sounds. You read well.
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Thank you very much, Jim! I’m glad you enjoyed my rendition of Derek Ross’s poem.
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I agree! And many days these days, I do want to believe that a calm is out there, somewhere.
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I think there is. I just don’t know how far off it is.
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Powerful poem and reading, Liz. Thanks for introducing us to Derek.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed them, Bette! Derek is a wonderful poet.
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I thoroughly enjoyed your reading of Derek’s lovely poem. Winslow Homer’s paintings pair perfectly with the poem. ❤
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Thank you very much, Cheryl! I totally lucked out with finding the paintings.
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Thanks, Liz, for sharing. I missed this (and so many others) in Step Back. I just love Derek’s poetry and photography.
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You’re welcome, Goff. I’m a huge fan of Derek’s work.
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I am just beginning to realize how much Step Back Time has kept me away from blogging and how much I have missed. Happy Saturday Liz.
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Happy Saturday, Goff. Enjoy your Step Forward Time!
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A beautiful reading, Liz, along with wonderful paintings. Very nice post.
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Thank you, Janet. I’m a big fan of Derek’s poetry and artwork.
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Wonderful poem of hope through the storm. I hope Florida is feeling some of that comfort today ~
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I hope so, too. Thank you for listening and commenting, Sherry.
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