24 thoughts on ““Cathy and Jimmy and Clarence Makes Three””
Liz, I’ve only had a chance to read this one story so far, but now I’m so eager to read more! Such quiet, intense, private drama in Cathy’s story. I was completely drawn in. The pacing is perfect. Cathy and Jimmy feel so real, as do the dynamics and dialogue between them. I was relieved Cathy went home at the end but am still left feeling anxious for these three. The ending is so very human. I loved it.
Liz, this is such a seamlessly written story! The characters felt so real and it seems like such a natural story. Very well written. It is almost as if Cathy wrote out her feelings, her turmoil.
I enjoyed your story, especially her escape in her mind… there’s a cow, there’s a caribou. I thought you created a real character and I understood her impetuous trip to the bar. How many women, and men, have ended up in this situation, you wrote it well. Nice sweet ending.
I was surprised to see that Catherine Eaton Skinner was the featured artist. She has a summer house on my island and I have done work there. A charming house that is a wonderful gallery of her work over the years. She is a real talent.
This was such a powerful story Liz. Someone once said this to me and I took it as a massive compliment, so let me say the same to you – You do not miss a trick.
Look forward to reading the rest.
All my best Paul.
Thanks again, Paul. I have a book of short stories set in the same town. I’m shopping it with small presses, but if I get no takers, you’ve given me encouragement to go the self-publishing route.
Good luck, It is so hard getting companies to take the risk. Publishing has always been risky and not every publisher is a savvy as we expect them to be. I wish you every success. Based on what I have read you deserve it.
Liz, I’ve only had a chance to read this one story so far, but now I’m so eager to read more! Such quiet, intense, private drama in Cathy’s story. I was completely drawn in. The pacing is perfect. Cathy and Jimmy feel so real, as do the dynamics and dialogue between them. I was relieved Cathy went home at the end but am still left feeling anxious for these three. The ending is so very human. I loved it.
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Thank you for your kind words, Lemony! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.
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This story is quite wonderful. You did an excellent job. I’ll be reading the others too. Thanks, Liz
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Jill!
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This is so great! I’ve saved it to peruse… Thank you for sharing, Liz!
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You’re welcome! I hope you enjoy it.
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Liz, this is such a seamlessly written story! The characters felt so real and it seems like such a natural story. Very well written. It is almost as if Cathy wrote out her feelings, her turmoil.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! I’m so glad you enjoyed “Cathy” and “Jimmy.”
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Very cool. Always a pleasure to see your work in press.
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Thank you very much, John!
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Loneliness and misunderstanding abound in so many relationships, and young parenthood adds more layers and complications. Nice story, Liz.
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Sadly, yes. Thank you for reading and commenting, Brett.
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I enjoyed your story, especially her escape in her mind… there’s a cow, there’s a caribou. I thought you created a real character and I understood her impetuous trip to the bar. How many women, and men, have ended up in this situation, you wrote it well. Nice sweet ending.
I was surprised to see that Catherine Eaton Skinner was the featured artist. She has a summer house on my island and I have done work there. A charming house that is a wonderful gallery of her work over the years. She is a real talent.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Ted! I’m glad you enjoyed the story. That’s so interesting that you have a connection to the artist!
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A great story… wonderful characterization and Cathy is such a strong character.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Steven! I’m so glad you liked “Cathy and Jimmy and Clarence Makes Three.”
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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Wow. Now, I cannot wait to read the rest of your stories Liz & now I know why your surname Gauffreau rhymes with Proulx.
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Thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed the story, Paul!
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This was such a powerful story Liz. Someone once said this to me and I took it as a massive compliment, so let me say the same to you – You do not miss a trick.
Look forward to reading the rest.
All my best Paul.
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Thanks again, Paul. I have a book of short stories set in the same town. I’m shopping it with small presses, but if I get no takers, you’ve given me encouragement to go the self-publishing route.
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Good luck, It is so hard getting companies to take the risk. Publishing has always been risky and not every publisher is a savvy as we expect them to be. I wish you every success. Based on what I have read you deserve it.
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Thank you, Paul!
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